Graf #8

Thanks for sharing those other cause essays. They were all a little unusual. I'm not sure I actually liked any of the topics but I did get a good feel for how to set these up. They all start off with a good opening paragraph. The “meat” of these are all a little different, I like the way the first was set up the best. In the first, the thoughts were clearly separated and sort of “captured” in their respective paragraphs. The closing paragraphs all seem to summarize or wrap up the whole essay very well. I'm sure I have a better handle on how I'll lay mine out now that I've had a few examples.